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My wife asked if I wanted to go to NASCAR yesterday morning. I said, "Does a Dog Bark?" Dam... Straight. So.... Off to the track we went with our #3. He loved it just the same and even more when this beautiful young lady, wearing a race car driver's suit. Her name is Kylie Glick. She was very nice to our son and even asked if she could take a picture with him.

He also enjoyed getting some goodies from other drivers as we rented the grandstands.

I would also like to add, we enjoyed the small town track feel and even the music and car show. All the law enforcement with their recruiting tents was great to see too. Our #3 really enjoyed a bracelet Placer County Sheriff's had at their table. Then... All the stickers made this T21 Kid happy as can be and will be on display on his Chromebook for sure.

Thank you for this even. It brought back some memories with an old friend who is a household name from Vallejo as he strived from a pup on up.

Loved seeing all the youth doing their thing and all the young ladies with pageant dreams too. Having the Military (Air Force) Honor Guard presenting our counties flag, 💪 Awesome and with the little but strong 8 year old lady, proudly signing the Star Spangled Banner (National Anthem) just icing on the cake. She did herself and the entire crowd, 💓 Proud 💓

Thank You,

Paul Crews

West Sacramento CA

I need a bit more information to rewrite this text effectively. Could you please clarify the purpose of this rewrite? For example, is this a review for a website, a personal social media post, or a letter to the event organizers?

Knowing the intended audience and platform will help me determine the right tone and style. For instance:

For a social media post: I'd use a more casual, conversational tone, maybe with emojis.

For a formal letter to organizers: I'd use a more polished, professional tone.

For a public review: I'd focus on highlighting key aspects of the experience for others who might attend.

Once you provide more context, I can give you a few options that capture the warmth and excitement of your original message while making it more polished and clear.

For a public review

Here are a few options for a public review, each with a slightly different tone.

Option 1: Enthusiastic and Personal "My family and I had an amazing time at the NASCAR event yesterday! When my wife asked if I wanted to go, it was an instant 'yes.' Our son, a huge fan, absolutely loved it. The highlight for him was meeting the kind and beautiful driver, Kylie Glick, who even asked to take a picture with him. He was thrilled to get goodies from other drivers, too.

We really enjoyed the small-town feel of the track, the car show, and the music. It was also great to see all the law enforcement recruiting tents; our son was especially excited about the bracelet from the Placer County Sheriff's Office and the stickers he'll put on his Chromebook.

The entire event brought back great memories. Seeing all the young people, including the military honor guard presenting the flag and the eight-year-old girl singing the National Anthem so powerfully, was truly the icing on the cake. A huge thank you to everyone involved for a wonderful day that made our T21 kid so happy!"

Paul Crews West...

Purchased 3 VIP tickets to the NASCAR event in October for our sons 13th birthday. The parking was awful! Apparently there was Vip parking but it was not clearly marked nor was it clearly marked on the tickets or the instructions that came in the package with the tickets. I am disabled and walking with a crutch and a gigantic knee brace (Forest Gump style) And it was near impossible to get to any seating that was W** the VIP ticket purchases, Then when we got up there not one single person would move slide over or do anything of that nature to let similar and sit on a bottom seat in the bleachers who was wearing said knee brace. Was astounded at how rude the people there were. There was one girl who Was sitting on the 2nd bench and there were 3 seats available on the 1st bench yet when we approached she said no you cannot sit here and put her feet on the bottom bench. Normally this would not be an issue but again I am super laid up with a massive knee and back injury, When I asked if I could just sit down for a minute again I was told no but now her intoxicated father decided to add his 2 cents (keep in mind I had my 12 just turned 13 years old son with me. The man was vulgar and disruptive. I left to find a security guard and once I did the security officer DID NOTHING to help my plight. So disgusted we will NEVER BE BACK. I informed the nice lady at the gate, left my info and have yet to hear a word. Those tickets were not cheap and to have that...

My son and I went to the races last evening in Roseville. They do a really good job. I especially loved the last event where they have the trailer bash as it was beyond exciting and unbelievable. A good family outing. 9-9-23 We all went to the NASCAR Series on Sat. PM. A nice crowd, lots of varied classes of cars racing and they really do a pretty good job here. Pretty fun to watch and especially the Demolition Derby Trailer Bash at the end of the night ! Fireworks were really good too. To bad the Beer products are the useless Budweiser choices as who in racing wants their products after AB and Co. switching "teams" as they have done. Also, to many folks smoking weed around venue by the bathrooms and top of grandstands as lots of kids go to these events with families. That is not cool to...